Peer Review

The peer review we did today in class was very effective in giving me better ideas for my paper. I would say that what we did today was probably the most helpful we've done so far, for me. My partner was helpful in pointing out what I should elaborate more on, and other things that I should include in my paper to make it better overall. Reading her paper also gave me good ideas for things to include in my paper to make it more interesting to the reader, and set a more appropriate tone. Overall I would say that the peer review we used today was the most helpful to me in terms of getting better advice and finding out what I can do to better my paper.